Using DRAFT In Our Writing

This is the original sentence

As the sun rose,she twirled slowly through the forest trying to find her prince charming.

DRAFT Sentence

As the sun set,she twirled slowly through the forest but she was chased by the wolves.

I have written a original sentence first, but then I had to use the DRAFT to proof read my work and it sounded better then before.

Stretching Sentences

My partner and I have been learning how to turn a boring sentence into a powerful sentence. We started off by using the 5 w's so it can help us. We have learnt a lot and we can use it in our writing too.