Working With My Critical Friend

My critical friend is Jessie. Jessie helps me by commenting on my work to let me know if I have made a mistake so I can edit and fix, she rereads my writing to see if it makes sense and checking if I have put my punctuation in the right place. Have a critical friend really does help you a lot. Checking or marking your work can be really tough. Jessie supports me throughout my work and I do the same to her.