Just in that moment, my mum and sister was checking to see if we had everything in our car so we wouldn't forget anything behind. She just left the couches for dad to pick up in his truck. As soon as we arrived, my mum pulled out a blue key. It was the key for the house!. Mum told me if I could unlock the house. I froze with nerves. So I got out of the car and stood in front of the door.
This is my writing. I was learning to put my punctuation in the right place and use similes. Hope your enjoy reading it.
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