Today in writing I have been writing a orientation and using T.O.P.E.S. I have been writing a story about forest exploring and using characters,setting and problem to put my story in order. Our leaning intention is to plan and write an orientation.
Great work Victoria! Your orientation paints a picture in my mind! You have clearly explained the setting, characters and problem. Your descriptive language for the bear is an effective way to 'show not tell'. Well done.
Great work Victoria! Your orientation paints a picture in my mind! You have clearly explained the setting, characters and problem. Your descriptive language for the bear is an effective way to 'show not tell'. Well done.
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