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Tuesday 5 November 2013

Practicing Prompt 4



One Afternoon at 12:00 o'clock they was a little girl called Anna and she loved animals. On that afternoon Anna and her family went to the zoo to see some animals. Anna was excited. When they got to the zoo Anna was really happy. So as soon they got in they went around the zoo to look at animal’s. She saw turtles and parrots and many other animals that was inside the zoo.

Anna went by and she saw a animal on a tree and had big eyes and she didn’t know what is was, so she saw a animal keeper and asked her and said “hi animal keeper do you know what this animal is” and told her,  it was a Big eye monkey and Anna laughed. So Anna went by the glass and waved hi to the monkey. MeanWhile she was so happy she went running around the zoo and she saw a different animal and she was speaking to her family but she was actually talking to no one.

After that she looked behind and no one was there so she felt she was lost. So she went looking for her family and she was so worried, so she yelled out saying “ Mum where are you and she sat down. After when she yelled out she heard her mum and was together with her family and friend.

Mum told Anna  this “ don’t ever run like that ever again “. Mum was so disappointed at her so they all went back home. One he way back home Anna was thinking for what she was doing today and she said “ mum i am so sorry for running away and i promise that i won’t do it again and mum said okay and they went back home smiling and Anna heard a music on the radio and everyone was singing and i was funny. So at the end they went back home smiling.


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